My dad was at home on September 11th. He saw four airplanes crash. Two of them crashed into the Twin Towers. He saw another one crash into a field. Finally, the last one crashed into the Pentagon
You have a good idea about imagining your dad witnessed all of the events of September 11. You should try adding some more details about your dad, and how it was possible for him to see all of these events. (Remember, two planes were in New York City, one was in Pennsylvania, and one was near Washington, DC at the Pentagon). Good job! Mrs. Sullivan
You have a good idea about imagining your dad witnessed all of the events of September 11. You should try adding some more details about your dad, and how it was possible for him to see all of these events. (Remember, two planes were in New York City, one was in Pennsylvania, and one was near Washington, DC at the Pentagon). Good job! Mrs. Sullivan
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